Okay, I think this track has a story and its own emotion. How do I know? From its composition of course. But I think this track could be better if the orchestral section uses more professional sounds. In this track, compositions are pretty good but sound cheap. Also, drop basses are unique but still lack enough mixing. I mean basses are beating kick, or kick can be replaced with a better one.
And that's it, my opinion. This is unique and I hear a lot of potentials. Keep it up.